To end our exciting first week back we were lucky enough to have a visit from our Waikowhai Intermediate writing buddies. Last term we started some online shared writing. Our buddies at Waikowhai Intermediate gave us some feedback about our writing and since then we have also connected to write a shared piece together about a picture prompt.
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It was very exciting to meet our buddies and put a face to the name and the person we had been communicating with online. It was especially great to connect with some of the students who were previous Waikowhai Primary Students.
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Throughout the session we found out about the learning maps of our older colleagues and then we spent some time crafting a new piece of writing together. At the end of our session some of the very brave students decided to share.
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We look forward to working together to create stunning pieces of writing. Keep an eye out on our individual blogs to read the things that we are creating and sharing together as we connect with other students in our community.
Please leave us some positive, thoughtful or helpful feedback and ask us any questions to connect with us too.
Kai ora,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Paris. You guys are so creative you did the marshmallow challenge I don’t know what it means but I was really inspired what you guys were doing. I thought that you guys were going to eat marshmallows and do the chubby bunny challenge (marshmallow challenge). Maybe next time you can explain more about what the marshmallow challenge means.Why did you do the marshmallow challenge?Maybe you can give me some feed back on my blog. Here is
link to my blog
http://hpsparisb.blogspot.co.nz/
Keep up the good work
By: Paris
Hi is your name actually Jerry because that is the best name ever
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